The prompt was : “Post two paragraphs. In the first paragraph, identify at least three elements the two essays and writers have in common. These could be ideas, conclusions, kinds of examples, or specific lines. This paragraph is about ideas and evidence. (No use of “I talk” here!) In the second paragraph, talk about the way your own experiences confirm or challenge what you have presented in the first paragraph.”
In this assignment, I did not give any examples of why I thought what I thought in my first paragraph and I should have had proof. My writing looked like I had not even read the assignment! Hopefully, the re-write is better.
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